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    dots Submission Name: Dorothy's 44th Ozymandian Birthday Jamboree dots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    58/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2779/1297/258
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsDorothy's 44th Ozymandian Birthday Jamboree dots
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    unblow the candles
    Glinda Sue, anti-Em
    said Dot to her mutt
    and her three feral friends:

    the dumb and the lovestruck
    and the king in retreat
    on paws of discretion
    with a witch in pursuit

    while the wizard crashlanded
    at an airfield in France
    shouting "Topeka!"
    as he searched for his pants




    Submitted on 2011-01-04 11:33:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      oh wow!! this work really show talent...
    | Posted on 2012-05-21 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]
      You're just having too much fun :-D Too much fun...

    | Posted on 2011-02-16 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      Losing your pants is just one of the hazards of French air space... or so I've heard.

    This is delightfully awful, Bill -- some people get terribly upset when you do bad things to favourite childhood stories, but I love the idea of "her mutt and her three feral friends". Not to mention how many political situations can be summed up by that second stanza...

    | Posted on 2011-01-04 00:00:00 | by Fantastic Freya | [ Reply to This ]


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