Dorothy's 44th Ozymandian Birthday Jamboree

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Dorothy's 44th Ozymandian Birthday Jamboree

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unblow the candles Glinda Sue, anti-Em said Dot to her mutt and her three feral friends: the dumb and the lovestruck and the king in retreat on paws of discretion with a witch in pursuit while the wizard crashlanded at an airfield in France shouting "Topeka!" as he searched for his pants

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oh wow!! this work really show talent...

| Posted on 2012-05-21 00:00:00 | by Damien Vladimir | [ Reply to This ]

You're just having too much fun :-D Too much fun...

| Posted on 2011-02-16 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]

Losing your pants is just one of the hazards of French air space... or so I've heard. This is delightfully awful, Bill -- some people get terribly upset when you do bad things to favourite childhood stories, but I love the idea of "her mutt and her three feral friends". Not to mention how many political situations can be summed up by that second stanza...

| Posted on 2011-01-04 00:00:00 | by Fantastic Freya | [ Reply to This ]

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