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    dots Submission Name: Me without youdots
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    Author: Bloodlust86
    ASL Info:    24/F/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 56/49/53
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 793



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    dotsMe without youdots
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    So sick of being alone...So sick of waking up and knowing your no there...So sick of hurting like this..I thought by now I would be moved on...I thought by now I would no longer love you..Yet your the only thing I want...I didn't realize just how much you meant to me till the day you walked out of my life..I know I fucked up..It haunts me every waking moment...His touch was warm his kiss was sweet but it was nothing compared to yours...If only I could go back and change that time I would have told him no..Then I may of still had you...and I would not feel like this..My wrist are covered in scars..my blood is filled with traces of vodka...just trying to relieve some of the pain...Nothing seems to be doing it...Just one more night feeling like this and I just may call it quits...




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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it, it really describes the true feelings you have.
    I saw some misspells, but that's not a big deal.
    Just read more and you'll notice what you need to practice.
    :)
    | Posted on 2011-01-08 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      sounds like you regret something you did and from that mistake you have learned
    | Posted on 2011-01-06 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]
      um miss some spellings but goooooooooooooooood i think
    | Posted on 2011-01-06 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]


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