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    dots Submission Name: Winter's Silencedots
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    Author: Desi
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    dotsWinter's Silencedots
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    Winter's soft silence, falls quietly and covers the ground in virgin white.

    Trees groaning whispering with the weight.

    Some standing tall and straight, some bowing to simply wait for a fresh new year.

    Pure as the newly fallen snow.




    Submitted on 2011-01-05 04:38:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i saw where this could be just about nature and a snowfall...but it also could be an allegory for someone trying to maintain her innocence when there are temptations all around her...she is like the tree groaning under the weight of trying to be good...she doesn't want to bow to the temptations...

    either way...really nice tight piece of writing...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      There's something magical about winter, and winter's remarkable silence is a part of it. On still, cold winter days, one can virtually hear the voice of God in the forest.

    This was delightful to read, and stunning in the mood and perspective it brings with it!

    Nice work!
    | Posted on 2011-01-06 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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