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Bottled Inspiration


Author: Ontlogicalamity
ASL Info:    33/M/NY
Elite Ratio:    4.67 - 190 /194 /45
Words: 29
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I'm having a bad day creativity-wise. The dot dot dot represents a full 10 minutes of consideration.


Bottled Inspiration



A subtle sweetness, blended
With a tiny bite, bubbly fresh and cold
Flows down my gullet like...
Wet leaves after an autumn rain.
Bass is a damned good beer.




Submitted on 2004-07-27 14:40:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wouldn't you gag if wet leaves were flowing down your gullet. Bass beer made me think of fish and the gullet made me think of gills. Do you reckon that bass would drink Bass? They would have to pee in the water they live in though. At least we don't have to do that. Okay? You wanted nonscensical commentary.

I especially liked the ...which represented 10 minutes. I considered stopping there and waiting 10 minutes to finish reading, to get the full effect, but thought, nah!
| Posted on 2004-07-27 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]


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