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    dots Submission Name: The Enddots
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    Author: kstina
    ASL Info:    23/female/Dallas TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 0/2/15
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 448
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsThe Enddots
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    "Where were you?" he screams, ignoring my tears

    I make no excuses I have no more fears

    I know whats coming next so I wait looking into his eyes

    This time I promise myself I will not cry

    He continues to yell raising his hand, ready to strike

    I don't even move this time I won't try

    The pain doesn't come I'm numb to his blows

    I give up standing, falling to the floor

    His anger is gone he leaves me alone

    I get up and pick up the phone

    I think for a moment then put it back down

    Wondering how long it takes to drown...

    I take some meds out of the cabinet

    Hands shaking as i pour out a few caplets

    Bottle says "take no more than one a day"

    I take them all and slowly the pain fades away...






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