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    dots Submission Name: Perfection doesn't Comparedots
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    Author: kstina
    ASL Info:    23/female/Dallas TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 0/2/15
    Words: 320
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    He's everything i've ever dreamed about..all the qualities some girls would kill for.. i should feel blessed..yes he makes me smile and does his best to make me feel loved.. but..

    i guess it's just not meant to be

    kuz when i close my eyes it's still you i see..

    You were crazy, confusing, frustrating

    He's honest loyal and trustworthy

    You were always "baby im sorry" or "i forgot.."

    He's always on time never misses a call

    when he leaves am opening the door a hug goodbye

    feeling a lonely emptiness inside

    the nights spent together just laying in your arms

    left me warm and comfortable wanting more

    when you left i felt reluctant holding you tight

    dreading the moment when you kiss me goodnite

    my best friend thinks im crazy she says i have it all

    i feel like i don't have anything, trapped behind this emotional wall

    faking a smile as i struggle to hide

    that i can't breathe without you, im losing my mind

    He looks in my eyes he thinks he knows me, he thinks i care

    but i don't feel anything and i know im being unfair

    i know if you saw me i'd give you that fake smile too

    i also know you'd see right through

    i don't let you get close because i know you would see

    this battle raging on inside of me

    how did we let this happen? why didn't i stay?

    why did i push you away?

    all those flaws that drove me insane, are the one's i miss as i sit in the rain

    my tears not enough to ease the pain

    he's every girls dream, but what can i do?

    i don't want him..i need you..





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