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    dots Submission Name: Over but not The Enddots
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    Author: kstina
    ASL Info:    23/female/Dallas TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 0/2/15
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsOver but not The Enddots
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    It feels like its been forever & i miss

    Your Comfort, Your patients, Your touch, Your kiss

    The way you pulled me close & held on tight

    The way you + me = right

    But now everything has fallen apart

    i knew it was too good to be true from the start

    Nothing bad, you've faded away

    i tried to make you stay

    i thought i needed you but now i see a new light

    ill be okay, i wont cry myself to sleep tonight

    I thought i loved you, but you were blind & i was wrong

    And just like that the spark is gone





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