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    dots Submission Name: i Just Want to Go Home..dots
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    Author: kstina
    ASL Info:    23/female/Dallas TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 0/2/15
    Words: 235
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 577
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsi Just Want to Go Home..dots
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    alone and scared i lay here tonight

    wondering when i got caught up in all this darkness no light in sight

    someone please ease the pain

    please stop the thunder i cant stand the rain

    what is it like to smile? its been so long...

    when did my life start going so wrong?

    how did i get stuck here? why can't they see i dont belong?

    why are they making me stay? why am i so weak when i was once so strong?

    i cant take this anymore i must escape

    i need to get back to that place

    when laughter was as common as my next breath

    when i knew who i was with no second thoughts or regrets

    i miss those days when i was happy with my life

    comfortable with my surroundings familiar faces all around

    i hate this feeling of being knocked down

    i hate how my pillow is never dry

    i hate these tears of depression that put me to sleep every night

    i hate how i have nobody who i can truly call my friend

    nobody knows me am as invisible as the wind

    i hate this feeling of sadness that overwhelms me, am all alone

    why is everyone saying am wrong? i just want to go home




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      oooooo i love it. wen i read the title i was like o sum1 wants to go home cuz i get stuck in the middle of no whee sumtimes when im like hitch hikin n crap u know. but i like it. sweet



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    | Posted on 2011-01-05 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]

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