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    dots Submission Name: Open Your Eyesdots
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    Author: kstina
    ASL Info:    23/female/Dallas TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 0/2/15
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsOpen Your Eyesdots
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    have these last three years meant nothing to you

    what else do i have to do

    to make you open your eyes

    ive given you my everything why wont you be mine

    you broke through the barrier i built between me and the world

    something no one else managed before

    but what was the point if now your just gonna stand there like you dont know what to do next

    acting lost, confused, perplexed

    i told you everything, put my secrets in you

    did i make a mistake? will i soon regret this too?





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      I think it is never a mistake to open ourselves up to people. Holding things inside can smother us. So many people will come into our lives, like a butterfly they land on your shoulder for a while it feels comforting. If they fly away there will always be other ones land. Our lives are full of butterflies one day the one who is really right for us won't fly away. Thank you for sharing with us this poem. Keep your heart open and a net handy for the right butterfly who comes into your life. Hugs.. Desi
    | Posted on 2011-01-06 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]

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