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Submission Name: Pieces of a Puzzle dots

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Author:	jackz
ASL Info:	24/F/OH
Elite Ratio:	3.76 - 591/622/380
Words:	142

Class/Type:	Poetry/Happy
Total Views:	517
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College here i come :-)

Pieces of a Puzzle dots

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things came together
like the pieces of a puzzle
its all falling into place
as do the drops of rain when heaven cry’s down upon its earth...

this life Im living as made a u-turn
taking in all the good
all the beauty
I can
the energy is overwhelming
the feeling makes me enthusiastic

At heart I am a broken battered soul
searching, hurting, crying
....
Yet I'd have it no other way
for I am making it
I'll take my past and turn it around
I'll use it to help those whom cannot help themselves

I'll be okay
I'm going to make it
when I do you'll know
for my strength you'll feel
this light I shine you'll see
my overwhelming happiness and joy many will spread
You are the pieces to my puzzle

Submitted on 2011-01-07 08:30:55 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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there is such hope here....amidst all the damage, a rebuilding of self...

the heart still beats and is so strong....

and once the puzzle is put back together...no one will ever know how broken up it was in the past...

we use the bad stuff to grow stronger and move on and up....

i like the feeling i got from this.

although i felt a sadness, there was a light.
| Posted on 2011-03-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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