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    dots Submission Name: Pieces of a Puzzledots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    dotsPieces of a Puzzledots

    things came together
    like the pieces of a puzzle
    its all falling into place
    as do the drops of rain when heaven cry’s down upon its earth...

    this life Im living as made a u-turn
    taking in all the good
    all the beauty
    I can
    the energy is overwhelming
    the feeling makes me enthusiastic

    At heart I am a broken battered soul
    searching, hurting, crying
    Yet I'd have it no other way
    for I am making it
    I'll take my past and turn it around
    I'll use it to help those whom cannot help themselves

    I'll be okay
    I'm going to make it
    when I do you'll know
    for my strength you'll feel
    this light I shine you'll see
    my overwhelming happiness and joy many will spread
    You are the pieces to my puzzle

    Submitted on 2011-01-07 08:30:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      there is such hope here....amidst all the damage, a rebuilding of self...

    the heart still beats and is so strong....

    and once the puzzle is put back together...no one will ever know how broken up it was in the past...

    we use the bad stuff to grow stronger and move on and up....

    i like the feeling i got from this.

    although i felt a sadness, there was a light.
    | Posted on 2011-03-21 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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