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    dots Submission Name: I googled ... THE TRUTHdots
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    Author: col13x
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    Amazon dot com told me there were Terry Prachet books
    And Wikipedia told me “don’t believe the truth”

    There were factories built in shards of glass
    And cigarette buns twice as fast

    And then the truth is something you think that you know
    The organization of freedom and loving souls

    The truth is on line
    And we love the truth
    Knowing the truth
    And where is the truth

    And where the truth lies

    A grand theft auto encyclopaedia
    And Nibiru is gonna burn ya
    You’ve no choice just be there

    The truth is that we are in a serious decline
    But the truth is we’ve never had a better time

    We’re all digging away and searching for the truth
    But nothing, but the truth, so help me God

    There’s the truth about bible teachings
    And the truth about 9 elevenses
    As the truth wears off
    And in the lies we are lost

    The X files and Phys Ed stretching the truth
    About dog attacks and tragedies
    And, meat, bone and blood
    And who was Bin Laden
    And did this really happen
    The truth machine, the star gate and the ark

    Another version of the truth
    And nothing but the truth
    Defending the truth
    And knowing the truth

    Androids and Jesus
    And six pack abs
    Scientology and uncovering the facts



    All about nursing
    And the truth about heaven
    The real truth of religion
    The torture of truth
    The ugly truth

    The Oasis and Eiffel Tower
    The needles we hear about

    Get stuck in the vein with the vaccine

    As we’re falling apart in a frivolous tax
    The drug companies teaching us the grammar of accept
    Or shot down the barrel of a gun
    Comes the ultimate truth in all it’s forms

    So this it ! the truth at last !
    The Da Vinci code of having a blast
    And some one asks you “do you want the truth or would you prefer
    something beautiful ?”

    And there’s someone rolling around in a pit of truth
    Though the knives are cutting into their throat
    Don’t you know how the truth can hurt ?

    It won’t set you free by wireless and phones
    It won’t tell you anything you don’t already know
    And how under the guise of a song
    Tell you the truth is wrong

    No the truth isn’t sexy
    And it ain’t about milk
    It ain’t about nothing you knew nothing about
    It’s dieing on your lips
    And it’s falling at your feet
    It’s the sustenance you need, but you just won’t eat

    So concerned with knowing the truth
    That you’ve forgotten what the truth is about

    You’re falling into forever
    You are the one
    There isn’t any more truth more real than the sun

    You’re falling into forever
    You are the one
    There isn’t any more truth more real than the sun


    You’re falling into forever
    You are the one
    There isn’t any more truth more real than the sun




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      There are several statements in this piece that I connected with quite well, and this is something that has been on my mind a lot lately, though, we perhaps would come to different conclusions on the subject. I couldn't say, since I don't know you, so I'll simply point out my favorite quotes from this piece.

    "The truth is that we are in a serious decline
    But the truth is we've never had a better time.
    We're all digging away and searching for the truth
    But nothing, but the truth, so help me God."

    "And some one asks you, "do you want the truth or would you prefer something beautiful?"-- That line especially sticks with me. Observing reality lately, I'm seeing more and more that truth simply is...and everyone is trying to cope with what "is" by searching for beauty and exaggerating the things they want to exist and the things they like about life...then minimalizing the things they'd like to pretend do not exist. People cling to beauty, because there is little else that gives them hope and makes them feel that there is a purpose...But beauty in itself is fleeting. It's hard to sift through all the exaggerations and minimalizations to find what simply "is."
    Although, I don't believe I have exactly the same mindset as you with this, I can relate to your thoughts. Searching for truth can be so daunting when there's so much in the world that is minimalized, exaggerated, and fabricated.
    | Posted on 2011-01-09 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]


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