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    dots Submission Name: Pacmandots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1002
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    Description:
       Like a few of my poems, the subject matter of this poem is addiction, using the imagery of one of the greatest video games of all time. The real song is a rap in 15/8, I can share the link, but I can't promise it would be up forever. Ten random songs of mine can be found here http://www.myspace.com/effyourgod Pacman is at the very bottom, I am hiding it from who I wrote it about, but there it is if you want it. Song uploaded and posted as of 1-7-11


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    dotsPacmandots
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    Pacman running from his own ghost
    Pacman craving when he has the most
    Pacmans cold dead eyes
    Pacman runs but can never hide
    Pacman gotta charge you 25
    He's got no friends but he has a wife
    Pacmans fiend-quest never subsides
    Went down the tunnel and came out the other side

    Watching you die

    Pacman running without pushing a button
    Pacman stumbling run into a wall again
    Pacman will enough satisfy?
    Pacman ingests until he dies
    Pacmans delusions is foolin' him
    Thought he could eat his ghosts but they're still pursuing
    Pacman, moving and consuming in unison
    Eats all the pills in the room he's in, and fills it back up again

    Watching you die
    Watching you die

    Pacman running from his own ghosts
    Pacman running from his own ghosts
    Pacman running from his own ghosts
    Pacman running from his own ghosts




    Submitted on 2011-01-07 15:58:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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