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Operations A Must

Author: Mithrandir
ASL Info:    28/m/N.Y.
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Lot of shit on my mind... And I dont wanna think anymore...

Operations A Must

In this moment
let there be nothing
nothing but silence
as we operate

it's a strange request,
not being
asked to remove
his dreams

but that he should
want it done with a spoon
because its dull
and it will hurt more

The patient
suffers dillusions
along the lines
that if he no longer dreams
he is no longer human

and there for
not subject to
any further emotional pain
for the contiunce of his life..

So he has choosen
this to be the last thing
he feels

However I feel it must be said
that it is unfortunate
how much faith
the patient has placed
in such an unorthodox procedure

When all is said and done
I am quite certain
he will wake to find
that this is one more
failed dream
that will surely haunt him...

"Doctor, wouldn't it have
just been easier to
give him Lithium?"

Submitted on 2011-01-08 08:15:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ouch! My immediate thought is that dreams are excreted like so many other such body functions. What's the equivalent to fiber?
| Posted on 2011-01-10 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  As a schizophrenic I think I agree .
| Posted on 2011-01-09 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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