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    dots Submission Name: Looking Backdots
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    Author: Dead Bell
    ASL Info:    23/m/Ire
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 48/129/125
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsLooking Backdots
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    In this same room
    I have praised before
    Its, often warm, solutions.
    Pined remembrances

    Now ill here;
    Five days bed-loitering
    With ocean silence ringing ears
    And new years cold sun
    Gathering birds

    A large gull flew
    Through Venetian.
    Flew
    In frames and
    Out of view and
    Over roofs

    Will I get there?
    Will I pass this sickness of rooms?

    To where I can hide again
    For an hour or two
    In the corner of a dusky green,
    Our youth clamorously burnt ,
    And keep old flames
    Quietly burning out the night




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