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    Author: cedrickdada
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 7/45/53
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    one blocks the other
    and the other blocks another
    and another blocks whoever
    and whoever blocks one

    one blocks the other
    with a gangrene
    while the other blocks another
    with a toothpick
    another blocks whoever
    with a world
    while whoever blocks one
    with a glass of water

    it doesn't really matter
    what one blocks the other
    or what the other blocks another
    or what another blocks whoever
    or what whoever blocks one

    what matters here is the blocking
    until the blocks
    block themselves

    and there's no more to block




    Submitted on 2011-01-09 19:56:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ooooh! I get iiiiittt!!!
    Lol, I'm such a blond.
    Super good, at first I was like "WTF?" but then slowly i began understanding, and i totally 'dig' it, :p
    | Posted on 2011-01-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      i can always stop by one of your writes and be surprised. that's a nice thing btw.

    you are like the bowie of poetry. it's always in a mild state of reinvention. and it is never boring.

    oops.

    just realized you wanted nonsensical.

    gabba gabba hey, then.



    | Posted on 2011-01-10 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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