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    dots Submission Name: i don't know how to say no anymore.dots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsi don't know how to say no anymore.dots
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    I never said no
    so I guess this is my fault
    because his love is only growing
    and mine, well it never evolved.

    He wants to hold my hand
    he wants me to call him, my man
    but theirs only so much my little heart can take
    and im sorry to say it won't be mine breaking.

    I thought that he could heal my blues
    but all I can hear is the news
    and everyone is falling in love
    while im loathing myself tonight.

    He whispered lets make memories
    well im trying, can't you see?
    I loved him so much
    that when he left he took the best of me.

    Maybe one day ill fall in love with you
    but I doubt it will be anytime soon
    so im sorry for all that i've put you through
    but I don't know how to say no anymore.




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    ||| Comments |||
      I like your style. I could relate to the feelings you portray, it's almost like a reminder of the old me. Definately a cool piece.
    | Posted on 2011-01-19 00:00:00 | by obscureone | [ Reply to This ]
      :) We had very similar writes.
    I of coarse love this, because it's just what I am dealing with. -Everyone says "Time heals all wounds"....They just never define how much time.
    | Posted on 2011-01-12 00:00:00 | by Joybell | [ Reply to This ]
      it seems the theme today is all about love by the way thanx for yor comments
    love is what we make it some people get caught up in a past relationship and cant move on but time will heal all wounds
    being alone is a good thing because you learn to find out who you really are
    good write

    sandman
    | Posted on 2011-01-12 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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