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    dots Submission Name: Clerihew Style Poem dots

    Author: AshleyDYoung
    ASL Info:    19/F/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 28/33/34
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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       A Clerihew is a comic verse consisting of two couplets and a specific rhyming scheme, usually aabb. The poem is about/deals with a person/character within the first rhyme

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    dotsClerihew Style Poem dots

    Jerry is my husband, he makes me very happy
    and he says that I'm beautiful even when I look crappy
    He loves to joke and play many stupid boy games,
    he even likes to wear silly glasses with silly frames.

    Submitted on 2011-01-10 20:35:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's good that you try different styles.
    I moved from rhyme and meter, almost to prove I could do freeverse.

    Back then I actually thought that freeverse was the inferior form because without any restrictions you were basically free to say whatever you wanted, it is, and you are, but seriously, the lines have blurred.

    my general comment to you is that while it's great to try new styles, i think that whoever you are, you will achieve more and uncover more of what is of great worth if in all attempts, your primary concern is to whether or not it is a poem. And, for me, a poem is a precious thing, one that you would not throw away.

    it's like training, say if you were in the army, so you are out there training for war, well if you slack and say this is just pretend then chances are, when the time comes, you will get shot up like cowboys and indians.

    there's nothing wrong, with exploring, working through the use of different mechanics, but have the intent to make a poem, something you would not throw away.
    | Posted on 2011-01-16 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]
      Simply refreshing in a sweet and unfettered manner; you have made me smile.

    | Posted on 2011-01-11 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]
      Cute. I bet you make him happy as well.
    | Posted on 2011-01-10 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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