Dyin' Blues -------------------------------------------
A man came around Bout half hour ago
Left me with nothin but a smokin' hole.
Don't remember what I did
Maybe somethin' I said.
But that matters no more.
I've Been bleedin'
And I've been thinkin'
About nothin' but you.
Ooooohooohooohoooooohoh
I've got the dyin' blues.
Been watchin' blood fall to the floor
And I couldn't help
But think of you more.
Ooooohooohooohoooooohoh
I've got the dyin' blues.
I watch as I breathe
A simple fading steam
And as it starts to disappear
I feel a creepin' fear
And know it will be only moments
Before I. am. No. Looooonger here.
So, I've been bleedin'
And I've been thinkin'
Bout' nothin but you.
Ooooohooohooohoooooohoh
I've got them dyin' blues...
Heck, anything "blues" is cool by definition. Dyin' blues has to be the ultimate "blues" and of course we had to put in a woman in the picture somewhere. Now for a smokey room and some whiskey...
There something lyrical and rhythmical in your words and the way they flow with each other. You give me the dyin' blues which is exactly what you should be giving me. If I have such feelings only by reading your work, then you've done marvelously well.
i love the blues. not sure why really, because sometimes they are just so sad. it's not that i relish sadness, but moreso the fact that the blues are a feeling music. soulful. lived in.
i like this because i can imagine how the music might sound. it's simple too as well as relatable.
Submission Name: Dyin' Blues
