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    dots Submission Name: Photograph; your old blond hairdots

    Author: TollundMan
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsPhotograph; your old blond hairdots

    Colours resurrected make me feel a spectre,
    Another form; almost bodiless. Memories explode
    In walking darkness. I am the sad collector
    Of imagined embraces. Only starry eyes bode
    The amorous tensions that sleep between us.
    How do we function then? For when we meet,
    Cacoethes flames; becomes near caressed.
    How long can we suffer here? Dejected streets
    Strum the gaily chords of dead romance.
    I speak here, only, with this stolen picture
    Of her posing in some open space, her silent advance
    Crushes me. But here I cant ignore the stricture

    That all the daily hours insist upon me
    And all the dreamy love that always could be

    Submitted on 2011-01-11 16:12:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this poem. It completely represented the whole sensitivity of the narrator.
    If only I was as genius as some writers on here.
    | Posted on 2011-01-11 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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