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    dots Submission Name: Blood Moondots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsBlood Moondots
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    By the light of a Blood Moon's Rise
    Evil has gathered his allies
    In a froth of fright
    In dark of night
    The dead frolic around
    And ghouls crawl from the ground
    A thousand virgins bathe in boiling blood
    Grim nightmares churn bodies into mud
    Banshees wail of impending death
    Succubi steal that final breath
    Vampires gloat of red sun's demise
    The final terror is on the rise
    Werewolves are grinding bones
    911 is deleted from all the phones
    Mother church is in disgrace
    Innocence is all unlaced
    Every grim and grizzled fey
    Is now let out to play
    Squatting above them all
    The chosen one has come to call
    He has opened the way
    To the end of days
    Darkness finally is holding sway
    And all he has left to say
    Well bless my wicked heart
    Just let the screaming start




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      okay i got into this one...

    "911 is deleted" would like to see all cell phones deleted...

    the world has become such a mixed up/ messed up place...

    gone to hell...time for a purge---

    time to build another ark...and get rid of the mess...
    yes, "just let the screaming start"

    maybe if the screaming started...we might wake up and look at what we are doing to ourselves...and stop..

    all the imagery in this is very cool...banshees, werewolves, vampires..the monsters mixed in with the monsters of the church..the bad priests...
    we need to exorcize our demons and start over...

    people need to start caring about people again...

    we are all living in our own ghoulish world...and it's scary....

    thanks for this.
    | Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Let the screaming start... perfect for the mood I'm in tonight. Let the dead rise, let the living sink, and every bird fall from the sky to soften the ground for the angels to tumble down next.... If this world were a piece of paper, I'd crumple it up and throw it to you tonight. The question would be, tho, would you want to bother catching it?

    Happy trails, Dale... wherever we meet again ;)
    | Posted on 2011-01-23 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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