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** Love story

Author: sandman
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** Love story

I could write
A love story

I would say to you
Oh glory!
No worries
And leave my place
In your time.

Sorry to say
Love tuned you,
that way
Some may say,
you never will
But even I
Bet you will find
Happiness again!

Take your time
In your walk with life
Leave no regrets
No regress
And no more worries

Dry your eyes
Wipe away those tears
And walk away
from those years

So then
We carry on
I leave you another time
and it sends me sailing
To them!

Your sound of life
A heartache
Your frame of mind

Remember I
The masquerade
of your parade

But do not worry
Makes you happy again!

Some will say
Stay away
From those worries

Our memories
& their place
In your time

Same old face
My love story
is your time!

Submitted on 2011-01-13 14:31:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  great job again sandman i love it i thought it was a very powerful write. i just wow i have nothing to say to this i love it...Joy
| Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, check you out. I haven't seen you write with such power in sometime. Remember love is everlasting, if true.

Love of Christ,
| Posted on 2011-01-13 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
  i really enjoyed this, its always good to see someone who knows whats best for themselves and other people, cause i know that sometimes its the memories that get me through hard times. good write
| Posted on 2011-01-13 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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