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    dots Submission Name: ** Love storydots
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    Author: sandman
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 1644/1440/613
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dots** Love storydots
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    If
    I could write
    You!
    A love story

    I would say to you
    Oh glory!
    No worries
    And leave my place
    In your time.

    Sorry to say
    Love tuned you,
    that way
    Some may say,
    you never will
    But even I
    Bet you will find
    Happiness again!

    Take your time
    In your walk with life
    Leave no regrets
    No regress
    And no more worries

    Dry your eyes
    Wipe away those tears
    And walk away
    from those years

    So then
    We carry on
    I leave you another time
    and it sends me sailing
    To them!

    Your sound of life
    A heartache
    Your frame of mind

    Remember I
    The masquerade
    of your parade

    But do not worry
    Whatever
    Makes you happy again!

    Some will say
    Stay away
    From those worries

    Remember
    Our memories
    & their place
    In your time

    Same old face
    My love story
    is your time!




    Submitted on 2011-01-13 14:31:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      great job again sandman i love it i thought it was a very powerful write. i just wow i have nothing to say to this i love it...Joy
    | Posted on 2011-03-04 00:00:00 | by sweet_rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, check you out. I haven't seen you write with such power in sometime. Remember love is everlasting, if true.

    Love of Christ,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2011-01-13 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      i really enjoyed this, its always good to see someone who knows whats best for themselves and other people, cause i know that sometimes its the memories that get me through hard times. good write
    | Posted on 2011-01-13 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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