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the good bye
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i wrote this a LONG time ago. finally found it, now its here. enjoy.
the good bye
Have i failed as a follower?
Have i failed as a friend?
As much as i hate it
the answer is simply "yes"
I've no contro; over my life.
I follow orders when they are given
Its harsh to say it like that...
But it is what it is in the end.
Im sorry... for everything!
I was just an obstacle in the way.
The tension showed when i was around,
which proved i only ruined the day...
The candle burns ever so brightly
but the wax melts quite fast...
I only hope you find and read this,
...long after the day i pass
funny, when your on the verge of dying
and you keep it a secret
appologies and good byes are endless.
Im sorry that i wasnt a better friend.
Submitted on 2011-01-13 19:55:11
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You might have failed as a friend or a follower, you didnt do it deliberately... we are all fallible but very rarely someone gets up and admits that he was at fault.
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