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    dots Submission Name: Flame of Lifedots
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    Author: girly101
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 292/310/149
    Words: 314
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFlame of Lifedots
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    I am living life by the moment
    and its racing by like a wave of sound.
    So many times in my life ive felt
    that if I stop fighting I will drown.

    For once I am gliding
    walking on the oceans waves.
    Singing and smiling
    because I am happy these days.

    Life never gets easy
    but ive learned to like the taste of bitter sweet.
    Sometimes things are crashing down
    and falling at my feet.

    I have realized now though
    that doors slamming shut on me
    Means 10 others open up
    I just had to open my sad eyes to see.

    Things change and people move on
    like the wind and the sea.
    And sometimes things are shattered
    and somtimes they are ment to be.

    Lingering over the past
    just makes life dark and grey.
    I have to open my heart up
    and live like today is my last day.

    Sure, I still have shadows
    that dance around my soul.
    But I have mended a jaded heart
    and I am close enough to whole.

    Like a scarlet lick of fire
    I dance untamed
    And the heat of my embrace
    is all but trained.

    I may burn you
    with my love or my hate.
    Or I may warm you gently
    the fire decides our fate.

    And sometimes my words are like water
    cool and soothing as they pour over you.
    But when the water turns to ice
    stinging is all they may do.

    No matter if I am a fire or an ocean
    It still means the same.
    I run high with emotion
    and they are all but tame.

    Warming or cooling
    burning or stinging
    I can hurt and heal all the same.

    But in these moments I am happy
    and the heat runs cooled
    or the ice runs warm.






    Submitted on 2011-01-14 08:10:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      im moved in so many ways by this. very well said steph. this is by far the best ive ever read. beautiful in so many ways. great piece!! Fave!
    | Posted on 2011-01-14 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]


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