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    dots Submission Name: Vague Ideasdots

    Author: obscureone
    ASL Info:    21/m/MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.36 - 1/5/7
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 446
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 638

       Another spoken word piece I performed back in the day.

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    dotsVague Ideasdots

    Vague ideas, and a swollen vision. Nothing's changed but the life I envisioned. Silence has risen. Say anything, free me from this prison. Put my thoughts to rest, too many indecisions put my mind to the test. My views are second to none, someone else has said it best. A new dimension has left me undone.... an intermission, a disruption to the flow in my chest, eventually leading to cardiac arrest. Break the locks, hop the fences, get passed any and all defenses. Misery loves the number two, so break through and drag me down with you. Do anything, please wake me from this slumber. Everyone knows, one is the loneliest number.

    Submitted on 2011-01-14 19:19:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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