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    dots Submission Name: "Memento Mori"dots
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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 448
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 896



    Description:
       Try and count all the Flyleaf references ;P

    Nah, I wrote this because I love the band, they are amazing. I love Lacey. <3 she's just a beautiful soul. Anyway, it's just a poem with song references and band name references etc etc etc... It probably makes no sense, though... :/ meh.


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    dots"Memento Mori"dots
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    Try and call out to the Passerby
    "Memento Mori!"
    Tell them their life is a Treasure,
    A dazzling asset
    Not just an empty Flyleaf.

    Listen to their Tiny Heart beat
    from across the room
    It's okay to Breathe Today
    And let go of all Sorrow;
    Fix your Broken Wings.

    You know you're Fully Alive
    Don't ever say:
    "I'm So Sick of everything,"
    Just Set Apart This Dream
    And feel the atmosphere:
    All around you, All Around Me.

    Cassie...
    here we are Again
    Don't try to make a Beautiful Bride
    for the grave...
    You were incredible, So I Thought
    So, if you're Missing...

    What on Earth Have We Lost?

    (If you ever need help,
    I will be There For You.)




    Submitted on 2011-01-15 23:30:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh, btw, I know all of those songs and if you want a comment on your poem and not on the stuff I'm rambling on about(xD), you seriously put everything perfectly together! O.o
    | Posted on 2011-01-29 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      OHMYCHEZ!!!
    You like FlyLeaf, too?!?!
    *glomps*
    Dudette!!! Where have you been all my life!!!
    You are my official internet sister xDDD If you don't mind, of course ._.
    | Posted on 2011-01-29 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok if you really want to prove you are a music wh....
    you need to write this (only using band names)
    Still it is pretty neat.
    | Posted on 2011-01-16 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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