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    dots Submission Name: Wizard dots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWizard dots
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    Red sheets of satin drape over the stain.
    Her ember glows no more her soul is dead.
    The universe remains. Pieces of stars
    streak through an endless cavern, brief bits
    of light in forever-night, destination
    nowhere. Should some strange variegation
    spontaneously occur to time?

    Then given time, this too shall pass, as death
    then dies, a light may yet shine in undead
    eyes. The runes are drawn, blood sacrifice made.
    The vibronic ether hums, power drawn
    by rite of covenant seeps through concussed
    cracks. Reality quivers, imposable
    in non-time, made real by will alone.

    A glint cacodaemonic in-extremis
    taints jaded eyes. These eyes define death,
    they give death parameters to obey.
    Joined with beings who power gods, he
    becomes a god. Gliding back he pronounces
    what must now and forever be
    She Lives!




    Submitted on 2011-01-16 01:35:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I've never met such a wizard in previous reading.
    Harry Potter would slay himself over his love denying the Dark Arts to the bitter end...
    Gandalf wouldnt be so fixated on an individual, I dont think...although I suspect if he was susceptible that he would revive a male...
    Harry Dresden wouldnt have a problem with sacrificing his love for a greater good...

    but, this guy...
    he's determined to have what he wants.
    There's something to be said for that
    good and bad.
    A unique wizard.



    In an aside to Lloyd's comment:

    One of my favorite ex-laws would happily agree with Jimmy Russell's drinking tips, but he would insist that the product is 'Kickin' Chicken': redneck soulfood.
    | Posted on 2012-08-18 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      TMI, TMI... Shades of Mage and immense talent in your productions. We'll have to watch out for what we might see in the mirror after reading this one.
    So, the muse is working overtime yet again... At such times as you need a break from time to time I suggest using the three finger rule, all things in moderation of course:

    4- Follow the three finger rule
    “You know, in Kentucky we drink three fingers of bourbon. You know what three fingers is?” (Spreads his hand wide and points to his thumb, middle finger and pinky.) “We use a water glass for the bourbon and a shot glass for the water.” (Jimmy Russell, Wild Turkey master distiller)

    Personally, I seldom dilute with anything and then but with a little ice. Note: Rite Aid is running a sale on their Distiller's Choice Bourbon 1.75 ltr at $10.99. Those suckers across the street sold out early on this but it may be restocked by now. Otherwise it's worth hunting through their other stores in town.

    | Posted on 2011-01-19 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Subtle solace savvy , like a suave and sultry specter surreal . Remarkably wholesome of you . Seriously I have rarely been so impressed by your poetic moxie . Positive states of (sigh chick) regalia on the reliquiae requiem .
    | Posted on 2011-01-17 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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