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    dots Submission Name: conversations #5dots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsconversations #5dots
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    i have no way

    of knowing who you are



    (without stalkings,)

    in this lighting



    (you don't exist) without

    looking closer



    (without a soul)

    and squinting (through



    the smoke) with lips

    like an expensive purse



    (that descends) from

    heaven (from hell.)



    unknowingly. (knowing is)

    and then you leave



    again, (like some sort

    of death.) understanding.

    .




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