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    dots Submission Name: Go Away Grolddots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1138
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1038



    Description:
       The grossest, oldest, fattest. Today, some say old Grold's gone missin', klikitty klakin' south of the Mason-Dixon, others say that's a front because they nixed 'em. Either way. Grold? A'int gonna miss 'em.


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    dotsGo Away Grolddots
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    klikliklak gross old and fat
    shows his soul through his cataracts
    he just scat, straight shat on the kitchen mat
    and then he scratched scratched scratched to be let out back

    later on when i went out to rock a piss right quick
    old grold plowed his head straight click under my dick
    so i quit mid-piss as he dripped in it steaming
    relocate re-micturate look down he's lickin' the stream

    GO AWAY GROLD!!!
    GO AWAY GROLD!!!

    he eats accumulated fridgerator hair
    and when he breathes real deep high upon his chair
    analingus stench envenoms the air, in fact
    it's like a factory stacked in your olfactory tract

    i put a pepperoni log inside his trough
    it was as soft as a rigatoni but his mouth fell off
    it resembled an abalone with teeth all wrought
    that's the moment i noticed the groldest had started his premortis rot

    GO AWAY GROLD!!!
    GO AWAY GROLD!!!




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    ||| Comments |||
      like cats much?

    it's a bad thing when you think - just die already.

    i find it is hard sometimes to love something ugly.

    i have a girl who is about 15. she has lost a stretch of hair down her back, has glassyglossy eyes, and will chase my ass down for a drink of milk.

    her days are numbered. but it makes me sad to know that.

    | Posted on 2011-01-20 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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