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    dots Submission Name: Misconceptiondots
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    Author: Jester_Gesture
    ASL Info:    23/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 365/459/201
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Bytes: 407



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    dotsMisconceptiondots
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    And I thought it would be easy
    to say what I knew,
    remembering the me
    that listened to you.

    And I thought it would be slow
    and that I would whisper in,
    but I've lost all control
    uncovering my sins.

    And I thought it would hurt,
    but never this deep,
    retouching old wounds
    and taking back what I can't keep.




    Submitted on 2011-01-22 02:31:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this. It's so simple and honest. Sometimes there are moments like that... Keep on writing!
    | Posted on 2011-08-05 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      It is a delightful maze like life itself... the last stanza is awesome.
    | Posted on 2011-02-21 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
      And I thought it would be easy
    to say what I knew,
    remembering the me
    that listened to you.


    I loved that...I can relate so closley. The words were written to prfection, not a change to be made. Thanks for the good read!

    Denise
    | Posted on 2011-01-28 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, i really like your piece. you give us just enough to understand, but at the same time leave us wanting more. good write!
    | Posted on 2011-01-24 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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