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Submission Name: Misconception dots

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Author:	Jester_Gesture
ASL Info:	23/f
Elite Ratio:	3.41 - 365/459/201
Words:	62

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Misconception dots

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And I thought it would be easy
to say what I knew,
remembering the me
that listened to you.

And I thought it would be slow
and that I would whisper in,
but I've lost all control
uncovering my sins.

And I thought it would hurt,
but never this deep,
retouching old wounds
and taking back what I can't keep.

Submitted on 2011-01-22 02:31:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this. It's so simple and honest. Sometimes there are moments like that... Keep on writing!
| Posted on 2011-08-05 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
  It is a delightful maze like life itself... the last stanza is awesome.
| Posted on 2011-02-21 00:00:00 | by ShiveringFire | [ Reply to This ]
  And I thought it would be easy
to say what I knew,
remembering the me
that listened to you.

I loved that...I can relate so closley. The words were written to prfection, not a change to be made. Thanks for the good read!

Denise
| Posted on 2011-01-28 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
  wow, i really like your piece. you give us just enough to understand, but at the same time leave us wanting more. good write!
| Posted on 2011-01-24 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.