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    dots Submission Name: "Where Only Angels Fly"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
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    dots"Where Only Angels Fly"dots
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    There are places here on Planet Earth
    where only Angels fly
    the grass is always greener
    and there's always a cloudless sky.

    The breeze blows sweet and gentle
    and flowers always bloom
    the birds sing all through winter
    and there's never a thought of gloom.

    Bad luck is just a rumor!
    Bad days are never had.
    One's fortunes are always better,
    and are never really bad.

    And more amazing still
    it's a place where the heart and mind
    form a perfect union
    with troubles left behind.

    I find this place whenever
    I think of you and sigh
    and enter that magic wonderland
    where only Angels fly!




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      Happy day Ron! This was light as a feather and I AM going to soar with the Angels and Sing with the Birds ~*~

    Thanks for your pieces ~*~

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    | Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      When I close my eyes, I can see my sweet Angel son looking down and smiling at me. Thank you Ron for this beautiful story.
    Renee
    | Posted on 2011-05-18 00:00:00 | by reneeskorner | [ Reply to This ]
      Soft as song, smooth as silk, these words did describe;
    \the place in ones heart, where Angels are free to fly.
    I see my own sweet mother in this piece, thanks Ron.
    | Posted on 2011-04-16 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      Very gentle, peaceful, and a write tinged with a real appreciation of all the beautiful angels on this earth.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2011-03-16 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      some would say that only angels fly in texas :) i really enjoyed this, its a beautiful piece!
    | Posted on 2011-01-23 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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