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    dots Submission Name: Remember Me!dots

    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    dotsRemember Me!dots

    Remember Me!

    In the Passages of my Mind
    where Reverence once reigned
    Serenity mingles with Confusion
    Chaos lingers in Dark recesses
    Shimmering Silhoets
    Forgotten Ages
    Light Lingers on.

    Walk down my Highway
    regardless whither It leads
    Mingel with my Memories
    Taste my Thoughts
    Bitter Sweet.

    Enter my Temple
    Walk down the Eiles
    my LifeLine: Infinity
    Trace my Footsteps
    on The Gilded Floor.

    Pray at my Altar
    Sip from my Cup
    The Sweet Essence
    Battles Won Ventures Lost
    Share a Moment
    in my Eternity!

    Become One

    Thouhts linger On
    Sweet Fragrance of Life!
    Tender petals of a Pink Rose
    Love is Sublime!

    You Are!

    Submitted on 2011-01-24 14:16:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think it's nice when we're a hallway for someone else to tread.... although, most of the people I let in say I don't have enough pictures on my wall once they get inside. (metaphorically, of course)... but if they'd bother looking closer, they might fall into one and never find their way out.
    | Posted on 2011-01-26 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      Pretty in a commanding sort of way. Perhaps not what I expected in the way of historical details, but worth the reading.
    | Posted on 2011-01-24 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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