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    dots Submission Name: conversations # 7 1/4 - 7 3/4dots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsconversations # 7 1/4 - 7 3/4dots
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    conversations # 7 1/4



    it is better

    being

    (by yourself)

    around

    a lot of people

    because

    (you realize)

    that there is never

    really anyone

    (around you)

    that cares.

    (you're alone.)



    conversations # 7 1/2



    peel back your river

    and (remember) warm jets



    (the end is) near

    the edge



    (closed) in angst.

    (forever.)



    conversations # 7 3/4



    before i fell

    in love with (the queen

    of spain) the girl

    in the green jacket

    (forgot me)

    walking by,

    (on each corner)

    i was in love with no one.

    (of every street today.)




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