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    dots Submission Name: conversations #11dots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsconversations #11dots
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    too many people

    (whom i'm in love with)

    have the same name

    (is a mystery tonight.)

    sometimes.)



    i fall out of the doors

    and (not knowing) the window

    (is a purgatory) on pavement

    (that goes on forever)

    amongst staring eyes



    (every night) looking at me

    (into the next day)

    like i know

    where the light switch is.

    (and the next.)




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