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    dots Submission Name: conversations #13dots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsconversations #13dots
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    (the) girls near the hill

    come in (empty spray paint cans)



    and go (littering the street)

    with big-booted, heavy strides



    that, (get in my way)

    when i'm pounding



    the hardwood floor

    (trying to get somewhere)



    with determination

    (not so important)



    leaving echos in their wake.

    (and never planned.)



    but, when i hear you coming

    (i have no future)



    tiptoeing (in this place)

    i always look (so lightly)



    like a mythical bird, (dressed

    in) long forgotten (shadows)



    through the years.

    (and memories of us.)




    Submitted on 2011-01-26 17:25:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i thot this was brilliant i read all 3 in order
    the words chosen pieced this together perfectly
    great read and beauty write

    sandman
    | Posted on 2011-01-27 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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