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    dots Submission Name: if you've got it go aheaddots
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    Author: Raistlin Sith
    ASL Info:    22/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 106/182/66
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsif you've got it go aheaddots
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    every time you shut that door
    i break the damn thing down,
    i'm not begging for your table scraps
    i'm here to take my crown.

    you did the best you could
    to bend me to your will,
    you failed for more than 20 years,
    can you bring yourself to kill?

    if you've got it go ahead,
    tear me limb from limb,
    put that pistol in my mouth,
    I won't cave to your whims

    you don't scare me anymore,
    your lies have been diffused
    you must think i'm one of them,
    but buddy you're confused.




    Submitted on 2011-01-26 23:25:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thats right, get mad...I think that is the best option. Hope this made you feel better, I know some of my best work is done when Im so pissed I cant see straight haha.
    | Posted on 2011-01-28 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats right, get mad...I think that is the best option. Hope this made you feel better, I know some of my best work is done when Im so pissed I cant see straight haha.
    | Posted on 2011-01-28 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]


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