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    dots Submission Name: My Faultdots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I've been wishing on the wrong stars
    and its all coming back to me,
    the things I did that got me here,
    and its all my fault, its all my fault.

    I've been licking salt off tabletops
    and I can't stop trying too hard,
    staying awake for days and
    I know that its all my fault.

    I haven't had a proper meal
    since the last time I saw my mom
    and I haven't had much sleep
    since the last night you were home.

    And I know its all my fault, its all my fault.
    If you could listen to what I say
    and not have to hear me talk,
    you'd understand what it is I want.

    I've been wiping my eyes on dirty rags
    and keeping my feelings in laundry bags,
    trying to show I'm getting better when I'm not
    and I'm sorry and I know its all my fault.

    When I cough, I taste rocks
    and I can't seem to get back what I lost,
    and I know its all my fault, its all my fault
    and you're all I want.




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