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    dots Submission Name: A snow flakes beauty dots
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    Author: littlepoet
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    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA snow flakes beauty dots
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    Is winters shroud
    Upon the ground
    Sweet marvelous beauty
    Of a greater hand.

    Know matter how down
    We may feel before you
    Know leaves will be blooming
    On branches of a cherry trees
    Push through from frozen sod.

    It is a mystery and a miracle
    As I linger
    And hold you very dear
    Upon the mountain slope
    The sun rising behind me

    Wet with snow flakes falling
    Like the morning dew
    With sweet glittering trees
    What we see is a priceless treasure
    In our search for pleasure.

    That water that we stand upon
    And gives life for everyday life
    that pass’s on to plant life
    that’s all around us
    Every snowflake is like a crystal.

    Dropped by the wind like flowers
    Blossoms in spring
    The elements re echo of many of it’s gems
    Winter, Spring, summer, and fall
    Every snow flake is like a fairies falling gracefully
    With each rise in humidity.




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