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A snow flakes beauty

Author: littlepoet
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tell me what you think

A snow flakes beauty

Is winters shroud
Upon the ground
Sweet marvelous beauty
Of a greater hand.

Know matter how down
We may feel before you
Know leaves will be blooming
On branches of a cherry trees
Push through from frozen sod.

It is a mystery and a miracle
As I linger
And hold you very dear
Upon the mountain slope
The sun rising behind me

Wet with snow flakes falling
Like the morning dew
With sweet glittering trees
What we see is a priceless treasure
In our search for pleasure.

That water that we stand upon
And gives life for everyday life
that pass’s on to plant life
that’s all around us
Every snowflake is like a crystal.

Dropped by the wind like flowers
Blossoms in spring
The elements re echo of many of it’s gems
Winter, Spring, summer, and fall
Every snow flake is like a fairies falling gracefully
With each rise in humidity.

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