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    dots Submission Name: Gravitate to my Experimentatingdots

    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Haiku/Political
    Total Views: 521
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1274

       A collection of haikus I wrote in a few minutes. They're all haphazard thoughts so if they're weird and make no sense, then my apologies for not being a 'regular human bean'. Mkay?

    And also, there might be a few mistakes, I'm grooving to djent Lady Gaga remixes. Too crew for you. :D I'm actually kidding. No, not about the djent. I mean, like the "too crew" bit. Ugh, never mind.

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    dotsGravitate to my Experimentatingdots

    Spam Me:

    I don't mind your spam,
    In fact, it makes me feel loved.
    So go ahead, spam.


    At first, it's just noise,
    But if you really listen...
    Love polyrhythms.


    You think you have friends,
    But they always ignore you
    While you sit alone.


    Sam drives that toy car
    Up and down the freaking street.
    It's so annoying...!


    Periphery, Hord,
    Meshuggah, TesseracT and
    some Textures.
    A new metal scene;
    Heavy muted poly-riffs
    chug, chugga, chug, djun...!


    It's so amazing!
    Cure your cuts, bruises and age
    With some magic hair.

    International Baccalaureate:

    A class of crazy kids,
    An academic challenge.
    I'm one of those kids...


    How to be indie...
    Just don't be a conformist!
    Yet we look the same...


    I was meant to write
    a haiku here, but I ran
    out of words to say.

    Submitted on 2011-01-28 02:28:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hahaha, you're so my writer-idol :)
    You're so good at haiku >.> I wantz to be like you!!! n_n
    | Posted on 2011-01-28 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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