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    dots Submission Name: Gravitate to my Experimentatingdots
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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Haiku/Political
    Total Views: 533
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1274



    Description:
       A collection of haikus I wrote in a few minutes. They're all haphazard thoughts so if they're weird and make no sense, then my apologies for not being a 'regular human bean'. Mkay?

    And also, there might be a few mistakes, I'm grooving to djent Lady Gaga remixes. Too crew for you. :D I'm actually kidding. No, not about the djent. I mean, like the "too crew" bit. Ugh, never mind.


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    dotsGravitate to my Experimentatingdots
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    Spam Me:

    I don't mind your spam,
    In fact, it makes me feel loved.
    So go ahead, spam.

    Meshuggah:

    At first, it's just noise,
    But if you really listen...
    Love polyrhythms.

    Loneliness:

    You think you have friends,
    But they always ignore you
    While you sit alone.

    Neighbourhood:

    Sam drives that toy car
    Up and down the freaking street.
    It's so annoying...!

    Djent:

    1.
    Periphery, Hord,
    Meshuggah, TesseracT and
    some Textures.
    2.
    A new metal scene;
    Heavy muted poly-riffs
    chug, chugga, chug, djun...!

    RapunzHair:

    It's so amazing!
    Cure your cuts, bruises and age
    With some magic hair.

    International Baccalaureate:

    A class of crazy kids,
    An academic challenge.
    I'm one of those kids...

    Indie:

    How to be indie...
    Just don't be a conformist!
    Yet we look the same...

    Seriously:

    I was meant to write
    a haiku here, but I ran
    out of words to say.




    Submitted on 2011-01-28 02:28:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hahaha, you're so my writer-idol :)
    You're so good at haiku >.> I wantz to be like you!!! n_n
    | Posted on 2011-01-28 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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