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    dots Submission Name: Cheesy Love Poemdots
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    Author: obscureone
    ASL Info:    21/m/MI
    Elite Ratio:    1.36 - 1/5/7
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 447
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1123



    Description:
       For Mary Helzer, I still love you


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    dotsCheesy Love Poemdots
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    This is dedicated to the love of my life, my one and only.
    The one that filled the vast emptiness that was once me.
    You are the spark that set off this mass explosion.
    You're also the energy that fuels this new found emotion.
    I can't explain all of the things you do,
    That reasure me that our love is true,
    But just so you have a clue, I write a list to name off a few.
    It's your smile, your presence, its that look in your eyes,
    It's your adorable laugh, and the way you hold me tight.
    It's the feeling i get when we're together that is so right.
    It's the way i can't stop thinking about you when i lay down at night.
    It's the way you kiss me, never less than three.
    It's the countless love songs I've dedicated to thee.
    I love thinking about us growing old together,
    I love the way you love me and i know it'll last forever.
    There's so much more added to the list every day,
    It's crazy the way i love you and it'll always be that way.




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      I know where the poems coming from.
    Too bad you don't feel that way anymore.
    I like the poem anyway.
    | Posted on 2011-01-29 00:00:00 | by ToMyBride | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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