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    dots Submission Name: conversations #16dots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsconversations #16dots
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    tomorrow,
    i will not (remember living)

    forget
    that my own death
    (is a battle
    that) may never come
    (so easily) at all

    and everything (is lost
    while all) i've ever known
    or (is not) loved continues on
    (necessarily wanted.)
    with or without me.




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