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    dots Submission Name: Esther, My Frienddots

    Author: Savannah Cullen
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 9/37/48
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       This is for my friend Esther, who I know much better after she died. She had cancer and died this past August. I miss her dearly, even if I didn't know her that well. This star won't go out, Esther, Rest in Awesome and DFTBA

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    dotsEsther, My Frienddots

    You were a smile
    A heartbeat
    Was your best friend,
    Each day
    Was your next adventure,
    And death
    Was in no way your last.
    I didn’t know you well
    In life
    But I know you now
    After death.
    We shared a birthday
    A community
    A want
    A love
    And I didn’t appreciate it before.
    Taken from Life’s grip suddenly
    Yanked away by Death
    At the age of 16;
    Far too young
    But still
    You were a star
    A light
    That years from now
    Will continue to burn on
    In our hearts.

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      hey this was very nice tribute to someone
    death brings out the best in most people
    it seems thats when people are the most kindest
    | Posted on 2011-02-02 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Life is not counted by the years you have lived rather by the hearts you have touched and how many memories of your good actions you have left when you are gone. Your poem is very well reflecting this. It is indeed a very sweet poem which penetrates to the bottom of the heart. Good job.
    | Posted on 2011-01-30 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      Amen!!! *sniffles* That's the most true poem I have read on this site, yet. I really get you, I had a really close friend in Pre-K and I found out he died of cancer in second grade after 1 year of not seeing him. :(
    | Posted on 2011-01-29 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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