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    dots Submission Name: My Love??dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Depressed
    Total Views: 501
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       I love you.. yet how can I?


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    dotsMy Love??dots
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    I love you
    yet my actions say otherwise
    I need you
    although it wasn't you I was with last week
    It wasn't you whispering sweet nothings in my ear
    I wasn't you caressing my wet neck as the hot water hit our naked bodies...
    I shared myself with another man

    Allowing myself to believe you no longer loved me the way you once showed me everyday
    Confessing these fears I did,
    by sleeping in another man's bed,
    therefore ultimately lying to you.

    Before I knew it one lie becomes ten lies.
    Here I stand before you,
    possibly pregnant and little do you know.

    Disgusted with myself I am,
    Pain I now feel
    Regret I feel and forever will

    For if you were to ever find out we would be through
    You deserver better, so Id understand nevertheless Id still beg for your forgiveness






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    ||| Comments |||
      Damn....Just, damn.I sense you desperately attempt to find the best way to let him know the truth based it being one of the hardest things you'd ever have to do.
    But it's best to suffer from telling the truth than living with not telling him period.Like whoa of the woe. >.<
    | Posted on 2011-01-31 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
       Honesty is the best policy. Take responsibility up front. It's the absolute hardest thing for most people to do. But it shows just how strong a person is.
    | Posted on 2011-01-30 00:00:00 | by Silencer | [ Reply to This ]


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