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    dots Submission Name: Circle Of Lifedots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 145/140/109
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsCircle Of Lifedots
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    Rain goes dry,
    So does my tearful eyes,
    Skies are no longer gray,
    The world wants to play.

    Things change,
    Not much remains the same,
    Lies and games,
    Fill my heart,
    With agonizing pain,
    It relives in my brain.

    I'll take time,
    To grieve and grieve,
    Til I feel fully relieved,
    I guess this is what,
    They call,
    The Circle Of Life.






    Submitted on 2011-01-30 04:48:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Life indeed does sometimes go in circles; tales told tells tales! Grief causes sympathy which creates new friends and new happiness!

    This is witty and interesting!
    | Posted on 2011-02-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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