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    dots Submission Name: Nanosecond Lifedots
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    Author: CynicalxDreamer
    ASL Info:    31/m/7th Level of Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 40/100/64
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1108



    Description:
       Inspired by the beautiful movie, 5 Centimeters per Second


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    dotsNanosecond Lifedots
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    Evanescent
    Our lives are fleeting
    Like the first snowflake to fall to the ground
    Sculpted and unique in shape
    It melts away away just as quickly as it was here
    We live as if the world stands still
    Or revolves around our perspectives
    As if Copernicus got the whole theory wrong
    And the galaxy orbited us instead of the sun

    Time moves on with or without us
    Light travels in a nanosecond
    Yet we expect life to slow down
    So we can stop and look at where we are
    You close your eyes, you blink
    And you go from 13 with so much potential
    To 30 wondering what have you done
    There is no hesitation, equivocation, procrastionation
    There is merely existence

    Time will never stop
    Nor should we
    Living life to the fullest sounds cliché
    So I will merely say to live
    Find meaning to your existence
    That you feel defines you
    That reassures you even in those moments
    Where you realize you're a melting snowflake
    Fading away




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      wow im so feeling this way now, like i look back and think what have i been doing these past couple of years! ugh times gone by so fast and its not fair sometimes. good write!
    | Posted on 2011-02-02 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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