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    dots Submission Name: conversations #22dots

    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsconversations #22dots

    whenever i imagine you,
    (the lights go out
    and) you're beautiful

    (i'm asleep,) in my mind
    (or close to it.)
    in almost every way.

    (when i wake up)
    you're always there
    and (i'm alone again)

    looking for me
    (in a cold sweat)
    around every corner

    (after a nightmare)
    and our lives to be.
    (where i always die.)

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