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    dots Submission Name: conversations #26dots

    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsconversations #26dots

    the urinals here
    are so (my face)

    art deco (is hurting)
    and monolithic
    (from concentration.)

    everyone talks about them
    (these puzzles) in this town
    (made of words)

    when i was at school
    people (and letters)
    were speaking of (being
    rearranged in) this place.

    (no paticular order)

    i'm here

    (it's) almost (fucking)
    every single night.

    (with my sanity)
    i suppose that i'm lucky

    (and my well being.)

    in some ways
    (i wish i were someplace else.)
    and not so much in others.

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