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    dots Submission Name: Crown Jewelsdots

    Author: mae
    Elite Ratio:    5.96 - 597/644/262
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    My love strode to the mountaintop
    leaving footprints in the sky.
    He went to find a diamond
    and bring it from on high

    to place upon my finger
    a ring of purest gold.
    'Twas meant to show his love for me,
    extravagant and bold.

    He wandered through the forest
    with neither map nor guide,
    looking for a spider's web
    still pure and untried,

    to adorn my neck in beauty
    most exquisitely rare.
    It sparkles still with morning dew,
    caught in his tiny snare.

    He swam the lake to there and back
    and rose not a single wave,
    to seek for me perfect pearls
    hid in a freshwater cave

    to grace my ears with the gentle glow
    of those who gave them birth.
    Such jewels have I, from my dearest love,
    as no one else on earth.

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