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    dots Submission Name: conversations #29dots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsconversations #29dots
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    a warm morning
    (in the street)
    wakes me up,
    reminding me
    of (slobbering junkies
    trying to light)
    the spring (up
    with wet matches)

    and the months to come.
    (always fail.

    there must be more
    to) winter

    (life.) is almost over.

    (a working lighter
    might help) the budding trees

    give me (some) hope.
    (and a clear mind.)




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