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conversations #32


Author: blackbird
ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194 /328 /300
Words: 78
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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conversations #32



(take me to the zen) monsters
(master) i need you
to go away


(i seek wisdom)
for awhile
(and knowledge)
for my own sanity.
(of all things)

my well being is (pure
and unpure)
constantly compromised
(in this world.)
by my own fear
(to be all knowing)

to truly live (is a lofty goal)

my own life.
is (not easily attained
without devotion.)

there (beneath) any hope
(everything) for me. (is love.)




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  Great description of the conflicting states and desires a mind can go through in a single moment.
| Posted on 2016-10-21 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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